mscadwell - Fishbowl

Discussion Starters:

In paragraph, what is notable that the writer did well?
What do you notice that needs revision?
What do you notice about the writer's language and diction?
What do you notice about the writer's use of transitions?
What do you notice about the writer's use of evidence?
What do you notice about the writer's use of elaboration?
What do you notice about the writer's conclusion paragraph?